Experience
during studying writing one.
After passing last semester, I took paragraph
writing, and the lecturers were mr.Saunir and ms.Fitrawati. Actually, I
did not know about writing, what should I write, but after my lecturers gave me
some explanation, I can understand just a little. After 2 weeks ago, I could understand more, and I
always gave motivation to myself that I can.
When I was studying with mr.Saunir, all students in
the class should present their writing assignment, and it was my turn. Showing
my presentation and explanation, it was really made me nervous because I was
not sure about my writing. Before I present my writing assignment, I showed my
writing to my friends and they said that “my writing was good”, but I was still
not confidence with my writing. After I finished my presentation, and got a
good comment, I said to myself that I could do the best and believe to myself.
As the time passed by, I learn more and more, I
asked to my friend, and find peer to correct my writing because I believe that
my friend or my peer can give comment more. When I saw the mark, I was really
surprised because I got a good mark.
the conclusion paragraph of your third essay is too short I guess. Please generate the ideas more :)
BalasHapusok.. I will be better next time..
HapusI think so. your conclusion is too short. good job nova
BalasHapusthank you me..
Hapusi agree with yossa, you should develop it..
BalasHapusI will develop it..
HapusThat's a good essay, oppa, but you should develop your idea become great. :)
BalasHapusok windi..
Hapusnova, your essay was nice. you pick up a topic that really familiar around us. Because life is like music, and we can separe by it.
BalasHapusok thank you..
HapusYou could develop your idea oppa :)
BalasHapusgood essay nova
BalasHapusGood progress. Keep writing
BalasHapus